Eye brow and eyes were adjusted, random movement of the hands were fixed on ones and twos and the left hand has now been parented to the curve controller of the right wrist to keep the hand steady. Mouth shapes for O and the word damage has been adjusted so that they can be understood more clearly. The gun also now slams into the open palm of the left hand causing follow through action, more follow through is added to head and upper body movement, upper body neck and no longer move at the same time slight overlap has been added. When the character is pointing the gun at the end she is now squinting with one eye closed.
Compared to the body mechanic shot this turned out better due to better planning and better reference, however I still feel that I could have done better if I had planned my shot better and recorded separate reference footage for the face and mouth shapes. The slightly better preparation made a significant improvement on this assignment compared to the body mechanic assignment.